What an interesting piece! I like it, it's so short and yet it tells so much. There are a lot of different feelings in play here, so it's very powerful. Maybe that's because of your descriptions, I love them - they're very vivid. Even as this flash fic sounds finished, the story itself feels incomplete and left me with a sense of longing. If that makes sense.

I wish I could come up with some sort of meaningful advice, but I like the story just as it is! The only thing I noticed is that you need a period at the end of this sentence: ""Adam, tell me again when and why you were created," she ordered"

Aside from that, good job!