Adventurers: Good-Guys for Hire
These are the first four chapters of the novel I am currently writing. These are very much works in progress; and any feedback is appreciated. Since I think all the typos have been found by now, I am looking for various opinions on the setup, scenes and characters!
Adventurers: Good Guys for Hire: Chapter 3 Harith gasped for breath by the time he got to Anna and Helens’ door, winded by adrenaline. All sense of upper-class dignity was abandoned as he pounded on their door. The confrontation between two of his guardians had shaken him to the bone.Adventurers: Good Guys for Hire: Chapter 3 More Like This
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